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This month since Sarah's accident, and this was the first place that didn't feel like a temporary crashpad.

Sophie was already out of the car, sneaker's crunching on the stones, pointing at the wraparound porch, like she discovered a castle. Dad, look, there's a swing! I forced the smile. Yeah, bug, we can fix it up. Money was tight. Sarah's life insurance had covered the funeral in the first few months, but not much else.

The house had come to me through a will, left by a grandmother, Eleanor, who'd race Sarah alone after her husband walked out.

Eleanor had died five years ago, leaving the place untouched. We couldn't afford much else, and the realtor said the market was soft. Renovate, cell, start over somewhere smaller, somewhere brighter. That was the plan. Inside, the air smelled of old wood and faint lavender. The wallpaper was peeling in long curls. The hardwood floor scratch from decades of feet.

Sophie ran from room to room, claiming the one with the window seat as hers. I let her. She needed something to be excited about. The first night, we ordered pizza because the kitchen was still half-boxed.

Sophie ate three slices, sauce on a chin, and asked for a story before bed.

"Tell me about Grandma Eleanor." She said, talking the quilt up to a chin. Mommy said she was the best mommy ever.

I hesitated. Sarah had always spoken of Eleanor, with a mix of funness and something sharper, something she never quite named.

I pulled the rocking chair closer. "She was very careful," I said. She loved your mom, a lot, made sure she had everything she needed. Sophie's eyes were wide. "Did she talk mommy in every night?" "Yeah," I said, every night. She smiled, satisfied, and fell asleep holding my hand.

Later, while unpacking the hallway closet, I found a small photo album tucked behind a stack of moth-eating coats. The cover was cracked leather. I opened it.

The first picture was black and white.

Eleanor, maybe 30, sitting at a kitchen table with a young Sarah, five or six on a lap. Eleanor was smiling, but the smile was too wide, lips stretched thin over teeth, eyes bright and unblinking. Sarah's face was pinched, and mouth was open, a spoonful of something halfway in. Eleanor's hand was firm on the back of Sarah's head, pressing the spoon forward. The caption, written a neat cursive.

"Good girls finish their supper." I stared at it too long. The smile didn't reach Eleanor's eyes. It was the kind of smile you give when you're trying to prove something to yourself. I closed the album and shoved it back on the shelf. Creepy family history, nothing more.

Downstairs, the house settled around me. Old timbers creaking, wind moving through the eaves. I told myself, it was just grief making everything feel heavier. Sophie was asleep, we were here, we were going to be okay. I turned off the kitchen light and went to bed, telling myself, the faint smell of milk in bleach in the hallway was just the old house.

It had to be.

For the first time in months, I let myself hope that maybe, just maybe, this place could be a second chance.

The renovations started small, ripping up the peeling Lenonium in the kitchen,

pulling down the water damage drywall in the hallway. I figured we'd patch things up enough to sell the place by summer. Sophie helped where she could, handing me tools with serious little nuts, proud to be, that is helper. On the third day, I pride open his section of baseball under the main staircase the check for rot. Behind the trim was a narrow panel, nailed shut and painted over years ago.

I woke to the crowbar until it popped free with a dry crack. Inside was a crawl space, barely three feet high, dark and dusty, smelling faintly of milk on sour and something chemical. A few old jars and a child shoes sat inside the opening.

I stared at it for a long moment, then nailed the panel back in place.

I told myself, I deal with it later, the house was full of weird little corners. That night, I went to bed exhausted, Sophie already asleep down the hall.

I left the bedroom door cracked the way she liked it, and sleep came fast.

I woke at 257 a.m. The digital clock glowed red on the nightstand. The room was cold, colder than it should have been with a heat running. I sat up slowly, rubbing my eyes, and that's when I saw her. She stood at the foot of the bed, too tall for the ceiling, her head bent slightly forward,

so the crown nearly brushed the plaster. Then, as a coat hanger, under a long, stain nightgown, that honed to the floor. The fabric was yellowed, streaked with old stains and something darker. Her face was pale, almost grey. But the smile was the worst part.

Lips stretched too wide, too many teeth showing, gums pulled back, like she was trying to prove how happy she was.

She didn't move at first, just watched me.

Then, she stepped closer, silent, no creak of floorboards, and reached down. Her hands were long, fingers knobby and white. She took the edge of the quilt, and gently, carefully, took it around my shoulders, smoothing it flat against my chest, like I was a child. Good boys need their rest, she whispered.

Her voice was soft, almost sweet, but it carried an echo that didn't belong in the room. Like it came from farther away than the foot of the bed. She lingered a second longer, smile fixed, then turned and walked out. The hallway light was off, but I saw her silhouette pass through the open doorway, and disappeared towards Sophie's room.

I sat there, heart hammering, sweat cold on my back. Sleep paralysis, I told myself, "Reef hallucination." I'd read about it.

We'd always seen their wives, parents seeing lost kids.

This wasn't Sarah. This was something else. I lay back down, all the blanket tighter, and stared at the ceiling, until the clock hit 315, and the cold eased. The next morning, Sophie was already at the kitchen table, eating cereal, humming

to herself. My poor coffee with shaking hands. Sleep okay, bug. She nodded, spoon halfway to a mouth. "A nice tall lady tucked me in."

My froze. She said, "Good girls need their rest." Sophie smiled, milk on her upper lip. She has a really big smile, like this. She stretched the mouth wide with a fingers showing all her teeth.

My stomach dropped. I looked toward a hallway, a crawl space under the stairs was still nail-shot. Nothing had moved. My forced the laugh, thin, and unconvincing.

Must've been a dream, kiddo.

Sophie shrugged and went back to a cereal.

I stood there, coffee going cold in my mug, staring at the closed panel.

The house had been empty for years before we moved in. No one else had lived here, since Ella not died.

The second night came quieter than the first.

I left every light in the house burning hallway bathroom. Sophie's nightlight shaped like a star. Even a porch ball outside. I told myself, it was for comfort. Sophie had asked why we were camping with lights.

And I said, it was because the house was old, and we were chasing away the dark. She accepted it, like kids do.

I went to bed at ten, exhausted from prying up more floorboards and patching drywall.

Sophie was already asleep, a door cracked open. I left mine the same way. I woke at 257 a.m. The room was cold again, colder than last night.

I sat up first, heart already racing before I even knew why.

She was in the doorway, taller than before, hit bent to clear the frame, nightgown, hanging like a wet cloth. The smile was wider, lips stretch so far, I could see the dark line where a gums met teeth. Too many of them, overlapping like broken tiles. She didn't speak at first, just watched with those bright, unblinking eyes. Then she moved.

She crossed the room in three long steps and reached for me.

A hand clamped around my jaw, fingers like cold iron, impossibly strong. I tried to pull away. My next strained muscles burning, but she held me still as if I were a doll. With her other hand, she produced the chipped porcelain bowl from nowhere, old floral pattern, the kind Eleanor would have used.

Inside was cold milk and torn hunks of white bread, sodden and dripping. Good boys finish this supper. She whispered voice-offed and sings on. She forced my mouth open.

I tasted the milk first, sour, too cold, coating my tongue, then the bread, wet, heavy,

was shoved in until it filled my cheeks. I gagged, tried to spit, but a grip tightened. Fingers dug into my jaw hinges, forcing my teeth apart wider. I thrashed, my left hand clawed at a wrist, skin smooth and naturally cool, with no give. My right hand swung wild, catching the bedpost.

Two fingers bent back with a six snap, pain exploded at my arm, white heart. She kept feeding, bread after bread, milk poured straight down my throat. I choked, coughed, milk bubbling out of my nose, my stomach heaved. I tried to scream, but nothing came but wet gurgles. The ball ended. She set it aside and smiled wider, teeth gleaming in the clock light.

"Good boy," she said. "All done," she released me. I fell forward, vomiting onto the sheets, milk, bread, bile. My broken fingers throughout, useless. I gasped, wretched again, tears streaming.

From the hallway came small footsteps, Sophie appeared in the doorway, robbing her eyes, her wild from sleep. Daddy? She saw the mess, the spilled milk pooling on the floor, the vomit, my shaking hands clutching the sheets. The smiling woman was gone, no sound of retreat, no creak of stairs, just gone.

I wiped my mouth with the back of my arm, forced my voice steady.

It took a bug, just a nightmare.

I had a bad dream and got sick.

Sophie's eyes were wide, she looked at the milk, the broken fingers I was trying to hide,

the soaked sheets. Was it the tall lady? She asked quietly. I stopped, I swallowed bile. No sweetie, just a bad dream.

Go back to bed, I'll clean up. She hesitated, then nodded slowly and padded back down the hall.

I sat there in the dark, broken fingers curled against my chest, tasting sour milk and fear.

The smile hadn't waved once, not when she fed me, not when I fought, not when I vomited. It never waved.

And now, I knew it could kill me, not with claws or teeth, with care, with good boys finish this supper.

I looked towards Sophie's room, the hallway light flickered once, then stayed steady. I didn't sleep again that night, I just sat up, broken hand cradled in my lap, listening for footsteps, that didn't come. The morning after the force feeding, I could only taste sour milk and bile, no matter how much I brush my teeth. Sunlight poured through the bedroom curtains in thin, dusty bars.

My hand was a swollen purple mess, fingers taped crockedly with electrical tape,

robbing every time my heartbeat. The sheets were stiff with dried vomit and spilled milk. The room still smelling faintly of sour dairy and fear. And sat up slowly, ribs aching from where I'd hit the floor and looked at the clock. 7.42 a.m.

The room felt normal, no cold spots or whispers.

Daylight had come, and the house fell quiet, like any other old farmhouse on a sunny morning. I excelled hard. Maybe the thing only came at night, maybe it was tied to the dark, to the hours when grief in exhaustion made everything feel realer than it should. If that was true, if daylight was safe, then we could leave.

Right now, before sunset. I swung my legs over the side of the bed, ignored the sharp pain in my hand, and started moving. I back to light, wonderful for me, clones, Sophie's meds, the little cash I had left, her birth certificate and my phone charger.

Another for her, pajamas, stuffed animals, the blanket she couldn't sleep without. I worked fast, quiet, listening for any creek that didn't belong. Sophie was still asleep in a room. I cracked the door, watched the chest rise and fall under the quilt, then closed it softly. Downstairs, I zipped the bags, set them by the front door, and went back up to wake her.

She blinked awake, her a wild halo rubbing her eyes with both fists. They bug, I said, keeping my voice light, even though my hand screamed when I lifted a blanket. We're going on a surprise adventure trip today, like camping, but in a motel with a pool, pack your favorite toys and pajamas, quick, okay, we're leaving soon. I face little like Christmas.

A pool, really? Really, adventure starts today, go on, pack fast. She scrambled out of bed, geagling, and ran to a toy chest. I heard her talking to a stuffed rabbit about the big trip as I hurried back downstairs. I loaded the car in the driveway, duffles in the trunk, Sophie's car seat buckled in the back.

The morning air was crisp, birds chirping, sun climbing higher. No shadows moved wrong, just a normal day. I slammed the trunk shut and called to what the house. Sophie, come on bug, time to go.

Silence.

I called again, louder.

Sophie, adventure's waiting.

Nothing.

A small cold prickle started at the base of my neck.

I stepped back inside, voice sharpened now. Sophie, for all the way, was empty. Her backpack lay at the bottom of the stairs, empty, toy scattered across the floor, like they've been dropped in a hurry. A single milky white footprint still fresh, led from the bottom step up into the shadowed landing above. I froze.

From the darkness, at the top of the stairs came a soft, wet sound. Drip, drip, drip. Then a voice, not Sophie's, were close enough to twist my guts, sweet and sing song echoing down the stairwell. Grandma says, naughty boys don't get to play with their toys. Yet, I called.

I looked up.

She stood at the top landing taller than the ceiling allowed, head bent forward, nightgown, dripping sour milk onto the wood.

A smile stretched wider than yesterday, teeth gleaming in the morning light that shouldn't have reached her. Naughty boy, she whispered, trying to run away with my new baby. A long arm lashed out faster than anything that tall should move. It caught me across the chest and slammed me backward. I hit the stairs hard, tumbling down in a tangle of limbs and pain.

My broken fingers smashed against the railing, fresh agony exploded at my arm. I landed at the bottom in a heap, gasping. From upstairs, Sophie's excited laugh caught off mid-tone, sharp and sudden, like a switch flipped. The front door slammed shut behind me with a sound like bones breaking. The lock clicked, the windows fogged over from the inside.

All exits sealed.

I lay in the floorboards, staring up at the ceiling, chest-heaving and throbbing.

Sophie was silent. I searched the house like a man possessed. Every closet under every bed behind every curtain. I caught Sophie's name onto my throat like sandpaper. Nothing.

No sign of her, except that a abandoned backpack at the bottom of the stairs, toy scattered,

like she'd been playing one second and gone the next.

Then I saw the footprints. Small, perfect, child-sized prints made of sour milk, leading from the stairs, straight to the sealed crawl space panel under the landing. The milk was still fresh, still glistening on the wood. I dropped my knees and pressed my ear against the painted panel.

Faint breathing, slow, shallow, but alive. Sophie, I whispered voice cracking. "Bug, I'm here, daddy's here." The soft muffled sound came back, her breathing hitched, like she was trying not to cry. Then the voice rolled through the house, gentle and patient.

The way my own grandmother used the speak when I was small and scraped my knee. "Good boys, stay and learn dear, behave yourself, and you'll get your toy back." The hallway lights flickered once. An in front of me was a tattered paper note. Three sentences were on it, written in neat, looping cursive like a grandmother's birthday card.

Finish everything grandma puts on your plate. Ways not one knot. Keep all the lights off after the sun goes down. We don't want you staying up all night, do we?

Never speak your little girl's name after bedtime.

Little ones neither rest and calling wakes them up. Instead of the words into my eyes burned, they weren't threads.

They were polite reminders.

The kind of things a loving grandma would say,

while pressing another helping of mashed potatoes on you,

while talking you in at night for a good night's rest. While shushing you when you try to call for your child after lights out, because she needs a beauty sleep. Except that these rules were law and breaking them could cost me my daughter. I stood slowly and walked to the kitchen.

A chipped porcelain ball lay on the table, cold milk, torn hungs of white bread, exactly like last night. It hadn't been there five minutes ago. The voice came again, coaxing almost fond. Eat up dear, growing boys need their strength, finish everything on your plate.

I looked all the crawl space, so if this breathing was still there, faint and waiting, trusting me to do the right thing. So I sat and picked up the spoon with my good hand.

I forced the first bite down.

It was soggy, sour and cold. My stomach lurched, but I swallowed. Another bite, another.

When the ball was empty and new one appeared beside it,

identical, refilling itself. The voice side happily. There's a good boy, clean your plate, and we'll talk about letting your little one come out to play. From the crawl space came Sophie's faint breathing.

I choked down the next spoonful. Tears mixing with the milk on my chin. I obeyed, because every time I finished the ball, the breathing from the crawl space grew a little louder, a little closer.

But every time I hesitated, even for a second,

the house responded. Door was creaked an hour, sealing sagged an inch lower, the hallway wallpaper tightened like skin over bone. I kept eating.

I kept the lights off at a sunset.

I didn't say so, this name once the sun went down.

Or while my mind raced, quietly, mapping the house, noting every weak floorboard, every loose nail, every corner, where the entity seemed slower to appear. The next day, I sat at the kitchen table.

My broken fingers were wrapped tight enough. The tape cutting into swollen skin. But the pain was background noise, compared to the silence from the crawl space. I hadn't heard sovis breathing since waking up.

I prepared myself for the worst, because the rules set to finish everything in my plate. And I couldn't risk another tightening of the house. The chipped boss and bowl was already there when I sat down. The same cold milk,

torn hongs of white bread floating like drowned islands. The milk had been cold five minutes ago. Now, it was icy, condensation beating on the rim. I picked up the spoon with my good hand.

The first bite went down like wet cement.

My stomach clenched, still raw from last night. I swallowed another bite. The bowl never emptied. Every time I scraped the bottom clean, the milk rose again, bread appearing in fresh pieces,

as if someone was silently tearing it from the loaf behind my back. I ate faster, my throat burned, my stomach swelled, pressing against my ribs until each breath felt like inhaling through a straw. Then she was there. The smiling grandma stood at the far end of the table,

head bent under the light fixture, night gown, dripping slow drops of sour milk onto the floorboards. A smile stretched wider. "You're not eating fast enough. Are you not hungry?"

She said, "Boy soft and fond. The way a grandmother might try to piggy eat her. She reached across the table. Arms stretching longer than it should, and clamped a cold fingers around my jaw.

The grip was iron. I tried to pull away. My neck strained, muscles tearing. She forced my mouth open wider. The spoon appeared in her other hand,

Heaped with sudden bread and milk.

She shoved it in.

I gagged, milk bubbleed out of my nose.

I choked, coughed, tried to spit.

But a fingers tight and holding my jaw shut

until I had to swallow or drown. Bite after bite. Bowl after bowl. My stomach ballooned. Painful, distended, pressing against my ribs.

In my struggle, I felt something crack inside. A rib gave for the wet snab. I screamed around the bread, but the sound came out muffled, wet. From the crawlspace came Sophie's breath again, weak.

I fought, clawed at a wrist with my good hand. My broken fingers smashed against the table, itched, fresh agony exploding at my arm. I kicked the chair backward, tried to stand,

but she pinned me to the seat with one hand

and my shoulder, weight like stone, more bread, more milk. My vision tunneled, milk poured down my chin, soaked my shirt and pulled in my lap. I vomited once, twice, hot, sour, burning my throat and the way up.

She didn't stop. The vomit splattered on the table. She scooped it back into the bowl with a spoon and fed it to me again. Good boys, don't waste food.

She suathed, smile never wavering,

eyes bright and unblinking. My collapsed forward, forehead hitting the table, half drowned in milk, stomach so swollen, I couldn't draw a full breath.

My cracked rib ground against itself with every gas.

My broken fingers dangled uselessly. She released me. The bowl was empty again, for now. She straightened, head brushing the ceiling, and glided backward toward the hallway.

Finish your supper dear. She said, "Sweetly, grandma will check on you later." She vanished into the shadows. I slid to the floor, milk pulling around me, tears mixing with a mess in my face.

From the crawlspace came Sophie's faint gasps. I pressed my forehead to the cold foreboard, and sobbed, quiet, broken and helpless. I had to keep going, because every time I obeyed, I bought her a few more hours, and every time I fought,

the house closed in tighter. I was playing the perfect grandson, while my body broke, when my daughter waited in the dark, while the smiling grandma smiled, and waited for me to finish my plate.

The endless supper left me broken on the kitchen floor, and lay there for what felt like hours, staring at the ceiling beams, listening to the house breathe around me. Sophie's faint breathing from the crawlspace had gone quiet again, just silence.

I was done. I had nothing left, no fight, and no plan. Just a hollowed out shell that had tried to be a good boy, and failed. If a bang forever meant she'd be let out someday, safe, whole, even if she called that thing grandma.

Then fine, I'd eat every bowl, I'd keep the lights off,

I'd never say a name after dark again, whatever it took.

I dragged myself across the floorboard to my elbows, broken hand trailing uselessly behind me, milk smeared in my wake. The crawlspace panel under the stairs loomed ahead, sealed tight, painted wood smooth and unyielding. I reached it, collapsed against it,

and pressed my forehead to the cool surface. I could hear a breathing again, so faint, so far away. It sounded like she was underwater. I'm sorry, bug, I whispered voice cracking. I'm so sorry, I tried, I really tried.

Tears mixed with the milk on my face, I closed my eyes,

Something small inside me, something that had been buried under the pain

and milk and fear caught fire.

No, not like this, but would not let that smiling thing raise my daughter. I would not let it teach her to finish her plate, to keep quiet after dark, to call it grandma. Sophie was mine, she was serious, she was ours.

And if the only way to get it back was the crawl into the dark and die trying,

then that was what I do. I opened my eyes, the panel was still there, nail shut, but the nails looked just loose enough to pull open. I pried at the edge of my good hand, splinters dug into my palm, I wedge my fingers under the wood, then pulled.

The panel came away with a dry crack, the crawl space gasped open,

narrow, barely too feet high. The sour melt smell rolled out like fog, thick and choking, dust moats drifted in the hallway light. I didn't hesitate. I squeezed in on my belly, showed a scraping plaster,

broken fingers dragging uselessly behind me.

The space was tight, tighter than it looked.

My cracked ribs screamed with every inch, dust rained down into my eyes, my mouth, the milk smell coated my tongue. Behind me, the panel snapped shut on its own. Bored's groaned, the crawl space tight and immediately walls pressing in,

sealing dropping, like the house was exhaling and closing around me. I kept crawling forward into the dark, because Sophie was in there somewhere, and I was coming for her, rules be damned. I was going to get my daughter back, or die trying.

The crawl space swallowed me whole, darkness was thick, and filled my mouth, my nose, my ears.

My broken fingers dragged uselessly behind me,

scraping plaster and wood, sending fresh jolter pain on my arm with every inch. Like someone was slowly twisting a blade inside my chest. I crawled on elbows and knees, shoulders waging against the narrow joists,

forcing me to excel completely to squeeze forward. The walls felt like they were breathing in time with me, closing tighter each time I inhaled. I kept moving, because Sophie was in here somewhere, I faint breathing echoed ahead, like a heartbeat in the dark.

Then the voice came, soft, grand motherly, sweetest milk. Come along dear, grandma will make you both a fact. It wasn't from one direction. It rolled through the beams, the plaster, the dirt, and the my palms, everywhere at once.

My froze, breath catching, the space behind me groaned, floorboards creaked, dust rained down into my eyes. Wet dragging sounds followed, night-gown fabric rustling against wood, milk dripping thick, slow plops. Good boys don't leave their toys behind.

She whispered, close and out. Grandma is very disappointed. Panic clawed up my throat. The passage narrowed, shoulders jammed hard, I had to twist sideways, ribs screaming, to inch forward.

The walls pressed in my chest, like a closing coffin. I couldn't breathe, couldn't turn,

just crawl forward, always forward.

Along fingers brushed my ankle, cold, narby and wet. I lunged, clawed through a tighter section with a joist pinched even closer, plus the tore of my shoulders, skin splitting, blood slipped my shirt. I pushed harder, elbows bleeding, rib grinding, bone on bone. Until I broke through, into a small hidden pocket chamber.

The space opened just enough to let me roll onto my back.

I gasped, sucking air that tasted like wrought.

And there she was.

Sophie, waste deep in it.

In case to nithick, off-white, lumpy mass that clung to a like wet dough.

It looked exactly like old, milk-soaked bread, left wrought, spongy and curdled, pale yellow in places, faintly sweet sour. The surface slowly pulsing as if digesting her. Strands of it wrapped over her arms, a chest, a closed eyes. Her head lulled to the side, lips-parted, breathing shallow but steady,

unconscious, cold to the touch. I gagged once, then lunged forward. I tore the mass with my good hand, fingers sank in, spongy. The texture was wrong, too much like flesh.

I ribbed hand falls away, gagging on a sour sweet smell,

and the weight clung to my skin. I used my teeth when my hands wasn't enough, bit, tore, spat.

The substance pulsed and the bifingers trying to reform.

I kept going, piece by piece, until I freed her arms, a waste, a legs. She was limp, cold but breathing. I scooped her against my chest, broken hand useless, cracked ribs stabbing with every movement, and started crawling backward, shoulders scraped raw against the joists.

The space was even tighter now, walls closer. I dragged her with me, elbows bleeding, breath coming in short, ragged gasps. The dragging sound behind me grew louder, closer. Naughty boy, the voice said, no longer sweet. She shot the word sharp, hungry,

bringing my new baby back out. Grandma is very disappointed.

Long fingers brushed my ankle, then gripped.

I twisted in panic, trying to kick, but the space was too tight. My ribs screamed. I couldn't breathe, couldn't turn, just feel her gripped tightening, pulling me back inch by inch into the dark.

Sophie, still unconscious in my arms, stirred weekly for the first time since I'd freed her.

A small voice rast out, cracked and faint. Daddy? The word cut through the crawl space like a blade, and in that small moment, the walls loosened ever so slightly. A smiling grandma recoiled.

A heartbroken whale tore from her. High, grand motherly, and broken all at once. But I'm the better mother. Her fingers loosened just for a heartbeat. I didn't hesitate.

I kicked, boot slammed into a arm, and the joists around me, desperate, the same frantic motion I'd used when she pinned me to the kitchen table. The impact cracked something inside the crawl space. Bored snapped, lost a rain down in heavy sheets. The weak instructor already stressed from years of damp and neglect, gave way behind me.

A smiling grandma shrieked into disappointment. Naughty boy, bragging the house. The collapse roared forward. Joyce buckling, dust choking the air. Milk soaked bread mass, splattering, like wet concrete.

Have fingers slipped from my ankle, as the tunnel caved. I hold Sophie forward through the chaos. Shored is tearing against splinted wood, ribs stabbing with every inch. Dabri ran down my back, aboard cracked against my skull. I kept moving.

A head, a faint grey square of light. I lunged. I drag Sophie through into the basement, then up the stairs, out the side door into the yard. Behind us, the house groaned deep, like a beast excelsing its last breath. We collapsed in the grass.

The smiling grandma's whale faded into the walls.

The farmhouse stood silent, partially caved in with a crawl space had been.

Sophie coughed once, weekly.

I still closed, but breathing steady and now.

I held her against my chest, broken hand, cold protectively around her, cracked rib aching with every gas.

We didn't go back inside. We never would.

We spent the night in the car at a distant gas station lot, doors locked, lights on.

The next day, I drove us far away to relatives and never looked back.

The farmhouse was condemned and demolished by the county two weeks later.

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