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How to Build a Post-Purchase Email Sequence That Kills Refunds and Builds Loyalty

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Words That Close: The Sales Copy Masterclass is a four-part series with Jim Edwards, one of the most respected names in copywriting and digital sales. Each episode in the series breaks down a differen...

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See, this is a thing where people, the quote-unquote experts will, oh, you ha...

Okay?

It's you need to envision a single person who is your avatar, and we're going to go back to your memory.

We talked about in the sales letter. Avatar, offer, hot buttons, you. What do you think are the kinds of things you're going to put in the subject line? You think those subject lines in that pre-head might be tied to the hot buttons for your offer, or the hot buttons for your avatar? Do you think that in this blurb where we're talking about what we're talking about?

We're going to be talking about the payoffs that they want, the questions that they want answered, the objections, and how this is going to fix or change or do all that stuff? That's, that's all we're doing here, is we're just tying in their stuff. So. And we're back with the king himself again, Jim Edwards. We just finished up doing the sales letters, and now we're going to be talking about email sequences.

100% -- Before we dive into the email sequences, I want to ask the question, Jim. There are so many different types of email sequence before the sale, pre-sale, after sale, a baby car, a band of cards, the list goes on.

If we were to try to buck it, you know, these into the most important email lists or email sequences, how would you buck it them?

So, there's a bunch of -- we got time to talk about the two most important ones, okay?

So, the first one is a promo sequence, and then the second one is a post-purchase follow-up sequence, okay? And really, if you wanted to say, okay, promo sequence, and then a follow-up sequence, and then with follow-up, it's for an opt-in, or after somebody has bought. And maybe we can talk about all three real quick. So, first thing I want to do is establish, okay, what makes a great email message?

Because now once we understand that, when I start plugging in types of emails, you'll understand each one of these always comes back to a great email message, okay? So, a sequence is made up just of individual messages, what makes a good email?

Well, similar to a sales letter, what's our first challenge with an email?

What is the first thing we want somebody to do with our email?

Open it up. Open it, that's right, look at you. Okay, so it's got a great subject line. And now, since everybody's using Gmail, or sign on it, everybody uses Gmail, you got your subject line, and then depending on how wide your monitor is, you know, if you've got like me, you've got a four foot wide monitor,

then all of a sudden you can start seeing the beginning of the email, right?

Or you can have what we'll call the pre-head, which basically people read that like a secondary headline, a secondary subject line.

And so, that shows the first words in the actual email itself. So, depending on your email, how you're sending your emails, sometimes it's like in go high level or something like that. I mean, you literally fill in subject line and then the pre-head. Otherwise, you just make sure if there's something else you want it to say. Those are the first words in your email that's going out.

So, next you're going to have the salutation. Salutation is preferably, you've got their name. You know, hey, Jim, hey, K, hey, Tim, hey, Ben, hey, whatever. Okay, so I don't ask for a name because it cuts down on the opt-in rate. Well, you're an idiot, okay?

Get their name if you can because everybody's, I mean, at least if you've got their name, they're going to be like, well, where the hell do I know this guy from? All right, and that also comes before the subject line is the From tag. You want to make sure that when it shows who it's coming from, that it, they recognize who the hell it's from, okay? So, like, all mine say, you know, from Jim Edwards. If they don't know who you, if they hate Jim Edwards, it makes it easy for him to hit the lead, okay?

But if they like Jim Edwards, oh, something from Jim Edwards, and what's it about? So, that's important as well.

Consistent from subject line, designed to get him to open the dang email, pre...

Hey, Jim, hey, Ben, hey, whatever. Now, you've got some kind of a blurb in here.

You've got a blurb as fancy for what the hell's it about?

Now, I'm old enough to remember when we had these things called memos. It would send out a memo. And in the memo, there was a blurb. What's it about? What's the purpose of the email?

What's the self-serving reason for them? Why you're sending it? Then, there's some sort of a call to action. Then there's the close, and then there's a PS, which reinforces the big idea. Okay, so, called action, close, PS reinforces the big idea, and then hits them with the call to action again.

What is the number one call to action for any email you're ever going to send? I do not know. Click here. Click here to blank. Okay.

Click here to register for the event. Click here to download your report. Click here to jump on the call with us. Click here to show up for today's meeting. Click here to, I mean, it's 99 times out of 100.

The purpose of any email, especially in a promo sequence, is to get them to click over somewhere to take action.

You're never going to close somebody in an email.

I mean, never is a long time. You know what the hell I'm saying. Okay. Normally, the call to action is to either keep your eyes open for something coming or click here for something to go do something. So, all of your emails want to follow this format.

Okay. That's a great email message. Well, we're going to talk about a promo email sequence. And if you think about it, every promo email sequence, except if it's a abandoned cart, I got to be careful with my every and all this other stuff.

Yeah, we call those universal's. Yeah, but you know what? Making a blanket statement keeps you warm in the winter. I had an argument with my brother-in-law who's a real brother-in-law. And he's like, you keep making blanket statements.

He usually did this with dumb people. And he was like, you're a dick. Anyway, the more family stories. So now, talking about a promo launch or any kind of launch.

Here's the thing you need to understand.

We ever into theater or anything like that. Myself? Yeah. I know. Okay.

How many acts are there in a play? Do you know? Well, I think it's a four as a four. Three acts that there are three acts in a play. And when you're thinking about any kind of a promo,

it follows a three act sequence. Okay. First is heads up or here it comes. Okay. Two.

Here it is. And three, there it goes. What do I mean by that? Well, you think about any product launch. How does a product launch work?

Okay. I got this thing. It's coming out this week. Keep your eyes open for an email.

It's going to be amazing.

If you really want to be able to create amazing sales letters, this is going to change everything like it did for me. It's so many of my people. Keep your eye on your inbox for tomorrow. Okay.

See you, bye.

Some kind of an email is going to come like that, right?

You're also going to see it on social media, right? Okay. So then the day that they release it or the day that the thing starts, here it is. Hey, go watch this video.

Hey, go watch this webinar. Hey, go read this report. Hey, go download this thing. It's whatever it is. Okay.

And then any good kind of product launch is going to have what? Well, it's, it's line that starts with dead. There's going to be a deadline. There's something you had. There's a reason for you to go by and by now.

So this is where you get into typically what we call the cart close. Where there's the countdown. It's like, hey, this is and what you'll find is the very last email.

You sent that said that you send that says, hey, basically this is the end.

That's where 40 to 50% of all your sales are going to come from that very last email. But if you haven't sent or is, well, why don't you just send that last email? Well, because chuckle head, if you don't send these other ones, you haven't set up the last one. So right here, right now, just understanding that.

You can write an amazing sequence because you understand how each one of thes...

Made how it needs to be structured, okay? And then you understand the purpose. Now, you can expand and contract this. Maybe you have two heads up emails.

Hey, something amazing going to be coming out next week.

Keep your eye out. And then if you're going to launch on Monday, then Sunday, like, hey, it drops tomorrow.

It's going to be amazing.

It's going to change the world. I'm so excited. I can barely talk. You know, those tiny emails, those are videos and stuff. And it can be driving to a video.

It can be done right there in the email. Here it is. This is where you could have, you know, that sequence of testimonial videos, demo videos, all that other stuff. And then you open up the cart or you could just have the cart open.

And then here it goes. Okay, coming into the final 72 hours, man. And this bonus is disappearing and all this other stuff. And again, when you understand how to structure the email, assembling the emails with the sequence is pretty easy.

Right? Yes.

So I haven't taught you how to write an email yet.

Have I? Nope. Yes, I did. What do I do? Well, you're all right.

I should say you've given us the structure. Yes. Okay. So what else do you want to know? I mean, we have the structure.

I mean, there's a lot to know here. Yes, we have the structure of how every email supposed to be written. Okay. And then we have the cart, you know, the heads up. Here it is.

And then the deadline. And when I was going to ask you to answer that is in between those,

the number of different emails is really up to you.

Uh, in terms of, there's no set number. Is that correct? And see, this is the thing where people, the quote unquote experts will tell you,

you have to send this one, this one and this one and it's this and this and this and that's all bullshit.

Okay. It's you need to envision a single person who is your avatar. And we're going to go back to your memory. We talked about in the sales letter. Avatar, offer, hot buttons, you.

What do you think are the kinds of things you're going to put in the subject line? You think those subject lines in that prehead might be tied to the hot buttons for your offer and/or the hot buttons for your avatar? Do you think that in this blurb where we're talking about what we're talking about? We're going to be talking about the payoffs that they want, the questions that they want answered,

the objections and how this is going to fix or change or do all that stuff? That's, that's all we're doing here is we're just tying in there stuff. So, you know, hey, want to extra listings next week? Well, I mean, you know, if you remember the example uses the real estate agency, they want to extra listings next week? Don't spend the dime on ads to do it.

Oh, we shit. That's going to get opened. Okay. Hey, K. Jim Edwards here. Something super exciting is dropping next week and I just want to give you a heads up.

I'm releasing my brand new masterclass on how to get two extra listing appointments every single week for the rest of your career. And if you're willing to do a little bit more or just do what I say one extra time,

what would happen if you got three listing appointments a week?

Think about the referrals. Think about the income. Think about the freedom that would bring and the change to your business professionally and personally. Well, the great news is you don't even have, you don't have to dream because it all drops next week. So keep an eye out.

Jim Edwards here talked to you soon. Holy crap. Yeah. P.S. This is the same system that I've been using for the last two years and have only taught to my closest inner circle of my platinum realtors.

But now I'm releasing it to the world. Thanks for the reminder on the P.S. there. Yeah. Yes, right? But that, I mean, that's pretty good email, right?

I would say it's a fantastic email. Yes. So again, when you know them, it practically writes itself and when you've got cool tools, it really writes itself. Okay. So what was the other one?

Okay. That's a promo. And you're like, well, everything's not a launch. What if I'm just going to be promoting my, you know, I'm just from just promoting my webinar. Okay.

Cool. Then you skip the heads up thing. Or maybe it's a, hey, head up next week. I'm doing a webinar. It's going to teach you my proven system for how to do that.

And register now. And then couple day, that here's reality. This has been proven by statistics. And nobody lies with statistics. But you got that closed.

You got that closed date.

Okay.

Well, and that's a great thing about, especially if you're trying to develop leads, using live events is the best way to develop

Leads because they have to sign up because you got to sign up in order to go to the event.

Point though, is that you don't need to send 50 emails to get somebody to sign up to an event. You really only need about three. You got a heads up email. Then you got the announcement email. Hey, we're doing this, you know, tomorrow or day after tomorrow.

And you really want to sign up because it's going to be this benefit, this benefit. And seats are going fast. And then the last email goes the morning of and or an hour before. Because over 50% of the people that sign up for your webinar are going to sign up the date of the webinar. And so that doing it in an hour before.

So doing one in the morning and then doing one in hour before is kind of a reminder thing. And you got to send some reminder emails and stuff in there too. But again, the construction of the email is the same.

And and that really follows the same thing of heads up.

Here it is, there it goes. There goes your opportunity. Now think about at the end of the after the event after the webinar. The post. Yeah.

That begins a whole other sequence for both the people that bought and the people that didn't buy. So if you're let's let's kind of divide that up. Okay. Did not buy. And did buy.

What's the purpose of your follow-up sequence for the people who did not buy?

I would say get him back to the other long form cells that are going back to the webinar. Get him back to the order page. One of those two. No. The purpose of the follow-up sequence for the people who did not buy is to get them to buy.

Yeah. Okay. I mean, I'm not split in hairs. If you think about it, the whole purpose is to get them to buy. Okay.

So what do we do? Number one. Do most people that go to a webinar or that say they're going to watch a video or come to an event. Do most of them go to it or not? No.

No. Hardly like 25% now, I think it's down that low. So the number one thing we want to do is let them know that the replay is available and where they can get it. Then we want to do the replay plus we want to reiterate the offer. Okay.

Then what we want to do is we want to talk about FAQ and overcome objections. Okay. And then drive them to the offer. Then depending on where we are, how long your sales cycle is and all that good stuff. You pretty much are going to start closing the cart. Okay.

So cart closes tomorrow. So cart warning. And then number five and number six are going to be closes at midnight. And then you got one hour. It's closing.

Okay. So can you throw in other stuff too? Yeah. You could throw in something that we've done the past that works really well.

If you want to follow up for a while is you can do a transcript.

Hey, I got the transcript for you. Some people don't want to watch it, but other people want to skim it. So we got the transcript. Hey, you know, I understand the FAQ yesterday, but we took the transcript. And I got an executive summary for you.

Were you one of those kids that made it through college on cliff notes? I was.

So we basically summarized the entire thing down to two pages that you can skim in three minutes.

Hey, one of the things that we've got here. Um, is I've got a checklist that we put together with all the action items and all the stuff to be. There's all kinds of shit that you can put in there. Okay. The point.

I even seen people do I which I love is if all you did was go on page two of the summary and read the one line where we say XYZ. This could change everything. This changed everything. I've also seen if you can only watch two minutes of the webinar. Click here and it'll take you to the webinar and it fast forward to that time stamp in the recording.

There's all kinds of stuff you can do. The biggest mistake you can do is you're here. There's the replay, here's the replay, here's the replay, here's the replay, here's the replay, here's the replay. Okay, card close. Which is what most people do.

A because they don't want to strategy and B because they suck. So don't suck and have a strategy or if you have a strategy you don't suck anymore.

This is life life is amazing when you make these small changes.

Okay.

So they buy or in the clear right now we're just going to send them their receipt and they're good.

Right? No. No. Not good. No, not good.

Once they bought, what do we need to do? What is our main objective once they bought? Reconfirm and resell them. Reconfirm and resell. Nice work.

And why do we want to resell?

When you say resell, do we resell them on the thing they just bought or we trying to sell them something else?

We're not. I love that question from my little understanding is we're actually resell them on why they bought the product. Not the product itself. On who they're going to become and what the product's going to have is going to solve their problems. And why do we want to do that?

Because people get buyers remorse and remember they buy emotionally and then they justify logically. And when they start justifying the opposite way logically, we get refund. So we want to prevent refunds. And so to summarize everything you just said, what we want to do is we want them to not refund. Yeah.

Let's yes. And we want to, I'm just, we have fun. And we want to build a relationship with them so that they'll buy more stuff. Okay. So how do we do that?

There's actually a very specific sequence that we use. All right.

The first thing is we'll call it the receipt email.

But it's more than just the receipt. They get the email that says, hey, we got your order. Here's when it's going to come. Here's how to download it. Here's how to claim it.

Here's so that they're not sitting there wondering, okay. I just gave money what the hell. You know, it's how to register for your intake call. Where to go to download your ebook. When do expect your box of brownies to show up?

Whatever it is. Okay. Yeah. And we even pack an coffee. So the sniffer dogs from DEA don't, oh, different kind of brownies.

So it's the receipt email. Okay. Or you want to call or they're getting the receipt. Maybe from the cart. So it's the acknowledgement.

Okay. That says acknowledgement. Right there. I know that doesn't look like it. My kindergarten teachers rolling over in a gray, but that says acknowledgement.

Then, hey, if you ever had an email not go through. You ever had email not get delivered. You ever had an email get eaten up by a spam. Yeah. Something like that.

That ever happened to you. Think it happens to your customers when you're sending them emails. Yes. Okay. So the next day, do you have good manners?

I would like to think I have great manners. I think you have excellent manners.

And what's the most important thing you can do when someone does something for you?

Say thank you. Say thank you. Okay. So the next day, you send a super short, thank you email. That says, hey, thanks for buying the unlimited listings pack.

For some reason, our registration email didn't show up yesterday. Here's where you can go to download it. And if you have any problems, here's our customer support desk. Thanks, Jim. So by sending something that's real short and it says thank you in the subject line.

If someone didn't get this and they're too stupid to like have sought out or looked through their thing. And they're sitting there getting a sour attitude. You get an email that says thank you. Hey, thanks for buying yesterday. If for some reason something didn't come through or show up.

Here's exactly how to get in touch with us. That's going to unsour the attitude of nine out of ten. Okay. So now, this is all, all the rest of this sequence is about building that relationship.

And the most important thing you can do.

You said refer and resell and the only thing I would add to that is result.

My objective is to get them a result as fast as possible. And so what I will do is send them emails like, hey, if you do nothing else. Okay. Okay, yeah, number one thing you can do to get results is X. And usually when I tell people like with our software is go watch the quick start video.

If you just watch the quick start video, it's going to show you this and this and this and you'll be able to hit the ground run it.

Okay.

And you keep them short.

Not you ain't sending Warren piece here.

Okay. So the number one thing you can do to be successful. Read this, look at this, watch this and it should be under like five or ten minutes max. Have you seen people in that in that email also say the number one thing to get results is X.

And here's what I want to do because you're so committed and I want to see you when here's an extra free gift or here's an extra thing just for being here with us.

So you're talking about using unadvertised bonuses. I like to use those later in the process. Okay. Because I why would I want to pile more crap on them when I'm trying to get them to use a crap they've already bought. What you want to do is you pile on the unadvertised bonuses a little later on in the process. Maybe only, you know, two days later a day later. Okay, but right now here's the one thing I want them to do because it's kind of like.

A goal that brings a lot of other goals along with it.

If if I tell you to wake up at 445 in the morning and within a half an hour being up, you're out, you drink a glass of water and you go walk for 30 minutes.

Think of all the things that come with that. Okay. Quiet time, you're up, you're moving, you're hydrated. You're you're already exercising, getting a matat all the things. Instead of giving them a big long ass list, just do these, this one thing. Okay. So now I like to give them what I call speed and time hacks. Okay. What's the difference between a speed hack? A speed hack is let me tell you how you can get results even faster with this. And then a time hack is let me show you how you can save a ton of time and energy.

These are very related, but they're not the same thing. Okay. Faster doesn't necessarily mean saving time, but it can. My point is if I send a, you know, hey, here's how you can other people spend two weeks doing this. I'm going to help you get results in 10 minutes. Or hey, how would you like to save five hours a week on your content marketing. Go watch this 10 minute video and explain exactly how to do it. Okay. And show you the tool to help you do it within our system. So now. I want to build a relationship, right? So maybe I'm, I do an unadvertised bonus right here.

Or I do it on one of these. Hey, you know what? It's important for me to help you save a bunch of time. So I went ahead and created these 10 avatars that are already pre done. I don't even have to mess with you. Just click them. They load in your account and you can use them immediately. Okay. So I got an unadvertised bonus.

Hey, do you have any past podcast episodes that you really wish people would listen to?

Yeah. Okay. Cool. So hey, you know what? I curated my top 10 podcast episodes. Or really, it's just basically this is the past content email. Okay. Here's some existing content we have from my podcast and from my blog. In order that can help you get amazing results. Well, what is that going to do? Hey, it means it got a bunch of crap. This is trying to get them to engage. And then you, you mean to tell me you'd send them an email every day for seven days? Hell yeah, I would.

How many times have you ever bought something from somebody you never heard from them again?

Or often the not. Or when you did hear from what's just pitch pitch pitch pitch pitch pitch pitch pitch pitch. Okay. Now, at this point, at least for me, I'm going to send them an email that asks them. Hey, oh, and somewhere in there, depending on how important it is for you, probably have an email like, hey, how to connect with us on social media. Or it's baked into all of these things. Hey, if you haven't already, go sign up for the Facebook group. So I always want to ask them for feedback. Hey, what could we do to make your experience better? Let me know. Just reply back to this email and I will personally see it.

Okay. So now what happens? Well, by this point, they've been hearing me for me for a week. I'm giving them nothing but value. They end up in my database. And I typically send every Wednesday. I send my newsletter. So now, after a week, they're in my flow of communication that is updating them.

It's giving them opportunities to engage more and to learn all kinds of cool stuff. And that's how I keep it simple.

I've seen people, you know, you need to use stacking follow-up funnels. So what happens is, and they start drawing this crap out on here. And it's enough to make me want to throw up from vertigo because it's like, you know, if they make it through here, but they don't click on this, then they go over here.

I had a friend of mine take two months designing a system like that with one ...

And then he finally ran the ad and realized that nobody gave a shit and nobody signed up for his thing and he wasted two months designing something for all the different

possibilities of what someone could or couldn't do and all the emails that could be sent. And nobody cared. It's really, again, it's just to me is, it goes to the whole thing where, well, now's the process, but also build it, sell it before you build it sell it before you build it, sell it before you build it. You can optimize later, but there's no reason to optimize if you can't even sell it if you don't know it works. I do that all the time and then I sell tickets to stuff on my team to class, hey, I pick the date sell the tickets.

I just, because I think it's important, you know, as we're talking about marketing and funnels the whole way.

I've worked with companies that won't even build the landing page. It will literally only run the Facebook ad to a dead page to nothing to even just make sure they even got the hook proper in the messaging proper. And then when they figure that out, they land a simple landing page to opt in. And then from there, they figure it out and then they build the, you know, the sequences they go, because as you even know, bait, you know, basic even BSL funnel, you have an opt-in page.

You have a sales letter page with a BSL then you have your thank you. All that takes time and if you can get the message right on the front end, none of that matters because they never see it.

Yeah, yeah, I don't have the balls to drive an ad to something that doesn't at least have a lot of people don't like it. You know, if you, if you do, it makes it even if you just drive into a newsletter, right? So, or something to collect their information, yeah.

So, I mean, and here's the thing, I mean, back to, yeah, this is about email, we're talking about follow-up sequences and stuff, but if you think about it, every single one, like even this thank you thing, think about, okay subject line.

Hey, from Jim Edwards subject line, thank you. Pre-head, in case you didn't see my email yesterday, dear, okay, thanks for buying the listing package yesterday. I just wanted to follow up and say thank you. And if you had any problems or you didn't get your receipt, contact us here. Okay, bye, I'll see you tomorrow. And then the next day, okay, hey, number one thing to get more listings, and then pre-head, do this right now. Hey, hey Jim Edwards here, I know you're probably need deep in the in-stop, but I know we get busy and you might be waiting for the weekend to go through it.

But if you could stop what you're doing right now and do this one thing, it's going to get you closer to those two extra listing appointments every single week than anything else you could do. Just click this link, watch this three minute and 32 second video, and I'll see you soon. Have a great day. Jim, PS, seriously. Drop what you're doing and click the link and watch the video, and this is how we're going to get you two extra appointments a week, 100 appointments a year. Okay, gotta go, bye. I mean, dude, I can write these emails in my head because I know the pattern and I know what I want to do, okay?

And if you want a tool that will help you to write it, I've got all kinds of tools inside a copy and content.au that will write one off emails for you. We got the email composer, Jeannie. I have email sequence, Jeannie's little create a mat, I call it the magic five day launch sequence. I've got follow up for when somebody buys, it got follow up when somebody doesn't buy, I mean, you're going to have emails coming out the Wahzu. I love it. So as we end here, I want to make sure if you've been following along through these part, you know, this four part series, we've talked about copy.

We've talked about sales letter. We've just talked about the world of email sequence and next following this, we are going to be talking about the opt-in page. Jim, just for everybody, where if people are like, I need Jim to day, where can they find you? You can go to either copy and content.au or you can go to jemedwards.com.

Thank you for always being here. I appreciate you.

Thanks for having me. Next time on the vault unlocked. That is the biggest sin, the stupidest thing you can do. Crack the code and all these three pillars, there is no reason why anybody in today's market can't have minimal. And I would love to know if you agree on this. Minimal, if those three things are cracked, a million dollar a year business guaranteed.

You have to be better than the chuckle heads.

And being better means you have to know the target audience. You have to really know psychologically what's going to make them react and you need to be able to get them to take the action you want them to take before they can have the bright shiny object squirrel moment in the next eight seconds.

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